{"id":55563,"date":"2023-03-07T09:46:02","date_gmt":"2023-03-07T14:46:02","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/?p=55563"},"modified":"2023-03-08T10:30:47","modified_gmt":"2023-03-08T15:30:47","slug":"__trashed-5","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/2023\/03\/__trashed-5.html","title":{"rendered":"Elsa Triolet on Mayakovsky&#8217;s Precious &#8216;Poetic Reserves&#8217;"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"wp-block-image is-style-default\">\n<figure class=\"alignleft size-full\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"220\" height=\"346\" data-attachment-id=\"55567\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220.jpg\" data-orig-size=\"220,346\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;1&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"mayakovsky-by-triolet (220)\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-medium-file=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220-191x300.jpg\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220.jpg\" src=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-55567\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220.jpg 220w, https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220-191x300.jpg 191w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 220px) 100vw, 220px\" \/><\/a><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<p><strong>Elsa Triolet&#8217;s short memoir of Vladimir Mayakovsky gives both an intimate view of the man and a broader sense of the stature he enjoyed in his time. What intrigued me most, however, was the chapter about a  little book he wrote, <em>How Verses Are Made<\/em>. <\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Mayakovsky didn&#8217;t care to analyze verse technique. He claimed, &#8220;I know nothing about iambics or trochaics and have no interest in the subject. [&#8230;] The preparatory work for a poem is a continuous activity [and] a large number of &#8216;poetic reserves&#8217; at your disposal.&#8221;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Triolet points out:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>He never worked sitting at a table with a pen in his hand. He worked wherever he was, from morning to night: in the street \u2014 where he&#8217;d roam around for hours; during conversations; while flirting with women &#8230; whatever he was doing he brought his work along, too, in his min<\/strong>d.&#8221;<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>His memory was so prodigious that he &#8220;not only knew all his own poetry by heart (and that was several books by the end of his life) but also volumes of other poetry both ancient and modern.&#8221;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>At the beginning of his poetic career he &#8216;wrote&#8217; \u2014 if you can call it that \u2014 all his poems completely in his head, in his memory. A poem that he&#8217;d change ten, even a hundred times, would undergo all those transformations in his head. He crossed out, altered, rewrote a 1500-line poem all in his mind and had perfect recall of each version. And what he eventually committed to paper would be the final draft after a series of drafts which he&#8217;d sometimes worked on for months.&#8221; <\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Which is not to say he didn&#8217;t jot down preliminary ideas to use for poems.  In fact, &#8220;he started noting down words, sentences and verses in his precious pocket-books \u2014 calling them his &#8216;poetic reserves.'&#8221; <\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>So what were they? Rhymes, alliterations, images, themes, ideas. Three examples:  an image of &#8220;the rain in New York&#8221;;  another of &#8220;an elderly toilet attendant in an enormous restaurant in Berlin&#8221;;  the idea of &#8220;an American song that needs to be adapted and Russified.&#8221;<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>All these reserves are stored in my head, the most complicated in my pocket-book. I never know how I&#8217;m going to use them. Preparing these reserves takes up all my time. I spend between 10 and 18 hours a day on them and I&#8217;m always muttering something. It&#8217;s this level of concentration that&#8217;s responsible for the notorious absent-mindedness of poets. <\/strong><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Despite putting in so much time, he said his &#8220;normal output, for work in progress, is just 8 to 10 lines a day.&#8221; You can understand why from his famous poem &#8220;Cloud in Trousers&#8221;:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image is-style-default\">\n<figure class=\"alignleft size-full\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400.jpeg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"400\" height=\"267\" data-attachment-id=\"55790\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/mayakovksy-foto-400\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400.jpeg\" data-orig-size=\"400,267\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;1&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"mayakovksy foto (400)\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-medium-file=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400-300x200.jpeg\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400.jpeg\" src=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400.jpeg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-55790\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400.jpeg 400w, https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/03\/mayakovksy-foto-400-300x200.jpeg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" \/><\/a><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\"><em><a href=\"https:\/\/www.poetryfoundation.org\/poets\/vladimir-mayakovsky\">Vladimir Mayakovsky with some of his propaganda posters. (Photo by: Sovfoto\/Universal Images Group via Getty Images)<\/a><\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<pre class=\"wp-block-verse\"><strong><em>I used to think\nthat books were made like this:\nA poet arrives\nopens his lips\nwith no effort\nand straight away\nthis simpleton, inspired,\nbrings forth a song\nto order.\n\nBut in truth\nbefore they start singing\npoets tramp about for ages\ngetting corns\nwhile the silly flounder of imagination\nundulates in the ooze of the heart. <\/em><\/strong><\/pre>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Elsa Triolet\u2019s short memoir of Vladimir Mayakovsky gives both an intimate view of the man and a broader sense of the stature he enjoyed in his time. What intrigued me most, however, was the chapter about a little book he wrote, &#8220;How Verses Are Made.&#8221; <\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":55567,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_genesis_hide_title":false,"_genesis_hide_breadcrumbs":false,"_genesis_hide_singular_image":false,"_genesis_hide_footer_widgets":false,"_genesis_custom_body_class":"","_genesis_custom_post_class":"","_genesis_layout":"","jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[26,18,23,17],"tags":[],"class_list":{"0":"post-55563","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","5":"has-post-thumbnail","7":"category-books","8":"category-literature","9":"category-news","10":"category-political-culture","11":"entry"},"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/mayakovsky-by-triolet-220.jpg","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/pbvgEs-esb","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/55563","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=55563"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/55563\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":55825,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/55563\/revisions\/55825"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/55567"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=55563"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=55563"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.artsjournal.com\/herman\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=55563"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}