Gary Lee-Nova, who partnered with Johnny Strike on ‘The Nova Machine,’ writes:
Thank you for posting an early version of page #1.
After several pages had been rendered, I began to question the structure of giving a page five rows. I decided to reorganize all the existing pages into a structure of four rows, and preferred the overall flow after the modification. I’ve posted an example of the four-row scheme below.
It is so cool to see the early-page version in a “live” situation.
Also, I’m pleased to observe someone deeply offended by the work. If you’ve read enough McLuhan, you probably understand that all an Artist is interested in is having an effect. So true!